The Dreaded Dentist- short story
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This was some descriptive writing work I had to do, hopefully you'll like it. It's not long but I'd really love some advice and feedback on it please?
Also I'm writing two other stories "The World Obviously Hates Me..." and "Sweet Bloody Revenge"
Please read them if you like this, they're probably not as good but hopefully you'll like them :)
Thank you so much!!!
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