17 parts Ongoing A dystopian story in which people have unnatural powers
Lorelai Walters can't remember much of her past. She's always lived on the streets, she never knew home. Then one day, some soldiers turn up in a shopping center where she's staying for the night. They take her to a place where more teenagers live. It's nothing like a home. There, they have to train, though nobody knows what for. When Lorelai decides not to do what she's being told and take things in her own hands, she doesn't know what awaits her. As she tries to escape the people trying to use her-and many others-for their plans, for the first time, she gets the chance to find out what happened to this destroyed and abandoned world-and maybe also about her past.
English isn't my first language, so I'd be happy to receive some criticism and also tips.
I'd like to know if my story is interesting, so I know if I should go on and how to improve it :)
I know, my writing isn't so good in the beginning, but I think it gets better throughout the story.
