Death

This is just a practice story for fun.
If you have any comments on how I can improve it, I would be very happy. :)
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Her entire life, Thana has been looked down upon. She is the death of her village. However, she never wanted to be death, and has secretly been keeping the souls that she has taken in tiny bottles.
One day while walking down the road, she meets a young girl called Miesha. Thana's life takes a big u-turn as she realise that there is more to herself than just death.

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~ Edel