His Best Friend
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Last published Thu, Mar 8, 2018
So I started this story back during my Freshmen year in high school. I have started working on it again. I need some feedback on how you guys like it so far, because I made some tweaks. I have the first four chapters completed. If you guys can give me some feedback on what you think of it I would very much appreciate it. I have access to getting it published once I finish writing and completing it.
The story is about a girl who has a crush on this guy the entire time she went to high school they end up going to the same college, and her best friend slash roommate back stabs her. She ends up getting involved with her crushes best friend. And they hit it off. Very well.
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