Sunless Sky

Sunless Sky

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A boy and I were standing on a bridge, we both jumped off, but sadly I lived. She has a secret, she is depressed. He has a secret, he is responsible for his brother's death. They didn't know each other but were connected by fate. She tried to jump off a bridge. But then a boy appeared. No words were spoken but a conversation was heard. No need to be talked out of anything because they were both there for the same reason. Deciding it'd be better to not go it alone, they both took the leap, by only the girl breached. -------------------------------------------------- This story is not about romanticizing a mental health disorder, it is about finding yourself with the support of others. If you see me in any way "romanticizing" it PLEASE PLEASE tell me in a nice way as I don't always realize it's being done with how engraved it is into my brain from other stories read. (Hey guys, this is my first attempt at a book. I would love any feedback just try to keep it at constructive criticism. I'm just trying to get out some creative writing, even if it isn't the best or the most grammatically correct. I'm not up on the technicalities to Wattpad as a writer seeing as this is my first book but I will try my best to make this an enjoyable read.)
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My Teddy

The corner of his mouth tilts upward slightly. I smile again. A smile!? A tiny one, but still. "Hm. So I got you to smile, that's progress, yeah? Can I get your name now?" I ask, swinging my feel a little. He shakes his head shyly, his mouth not moving at all. Geez! Why do I want to hear this dude talk so much? "Okay, that's fine. I can give you a nickname." I offer happily. He looks up from his book, raising his eyebrows. I just stare for a moment. He has nice eyes. Pretty brown chocolate orbs. They remind me so much of....... "Teddy." He shakes his head immediately, frowning. "What, why not? You remind me of my old teddy bear. He was a good listener and he didn't talk much..... just like you." I say softly, tilting my head. He continues to shake his head. I fold my arms, leaning back in my seat. "Yeah, it's definitely sticking. Teddy.....It has a nice ring to it, yeah?" He sighs, the first sound I have ever heard him make. "No." . . . *Jordan* Teddy!? Seriously!? She gave me a fucking NICKNAME!? What the hell does this girl want!? I stuff my hands into my pockets, walking down the busy street. Forget about her. She's just a annoying pretty girl, she'll go away. Everybody does. She HAS to go away. *Spoiler alert*: she doesn't. Don't get close to people or they'll end up getting hurt. That's my mindset. I've been through enough of that. This girl doesn't belong in my world anyway. She's too innocent. *Mature content* {Just a quick update, I am basically rewriting the story. I wrote it when I was in 8th grade and it makes me cringe every time I try to go back and edit it so keep in mind that it'll get better}

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