Here are the first 10 chapters of the story, please give me honest opinions, I want to better my writing and hopefully publish one day. Thank you so much! Santo left Italy and the influence of "The Family" in order to start a new life. Convincing the Don, to take over California wasn't easy but he managed with help from his two best friends. But when things start to go awry, he finds a gorgeous pixie at the center of it. Olivia just wants to take her twin sisters and leave their messed up lives behind. But when she overhears a conversation her step-father has and realizes her messed up life is about to get even worse, she does the only thing she can. She runs to The Boss and sells information in exchange for their safety. Will they be able to help each other or will pride and prejudice get in the way? TW: Some physical and sexual abuse, foul language and violence
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