Lucy and Wes

***This is mostly posted to help me get some feedback on whether or not to continue this story. Most of my past writings have seemed really childish and I just need to know what others feel about this so far. Is it too short for an intro on both of them? It's supposed to be vague, as a peek into what's going to happen much further along in the book, but is it too vague? Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks! :)