Continuous love story

Hi, this is one of the first things I've ever written that I considered publish worthy. Its taken years to write and when you read it you'll know why. Its short, but I just wanted to put this out here as a tester to see if people like what I write and how I write. I hope everyone likes this story, its kind of sad, but its good I think. Give it plenty of feedback if you can I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!!
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