On My Mind {Suspian}

On My Mind {Suspian}

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Slowly, she folded the letter from her sister. Her mind overflowed with thoughts and her blood burdened with envy. She was conflicted with mixed emotions. She knew she had left an effect on Caspian but she hadn't realised it had been so strong; She also knew he had left an effect on her; Occasionally, he'd appeared in her dreams. They would dance under the incandescent sky and intertwined their hearts with every-step. Their laughter was like symphonies to deafened ears; Gently, they would dance; their eyes wouldn't leave each others until the sun kissed the dawn and made the horizon a vast array of reality. Only then would she wake up and feel empty. - *Unedited* - Written over 4 years - It's been a few weeks since Lucy, Edmund and Eustace returned from Narnia. Susan is in America with her mother. She has made a new friend but something is missing in her life. Lucy writes Susan letters monthly, except this time Susan wasn't expecting to read what she saw. Especially not the letter she received from someone who wasn't Lucy; but someone she loved just as much. Became #5 in Pevensies, #1 in princecaspian & #1 in Suspian #WATTYS2018 • Cover by @tomlinsay •
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