On My Mind {Suspian}

On My Mind {Suspian}

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Slowly, she folded the letter from her sister. Her mind overflowed with thoughts and her blood burdened with envy. She was conflicted with mixed emotions. She knew she had left an effect on Caspian but she hadn't realised it had been so strong; She also knew he had left an effect on her; Occasionally, he'd appeared in her dreams. They would dance under the incandescent sky and intertwined their hearts with every-step. Their laughter was like symphonies to deafened ears; Gently, they would dance; their eyes wouldn't leave each others until the sun kissed the dawn and made the horizon a vast array of reality. Only then would she wake up and feel empty. - *Unedited* - Written over 4 years - It's been a few weeks since Lucy, Edmund and Eustace returned from Narnia. Susan is in America with her mother. She has made a new friend but something is missing in her life. Lucy writes Susan letters monthly, except this time Susan wasn't expecting to read what she saw. Especially not the letter she received from someone who wasn't Lucy; but someone she loved just as much. Became #5 in Pevensies, #1 in princecaspian & #1 in Suspian #WATTYS2018 • Cover by @tomlinsay •
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Her mother was one of the few who still believed Aslan would return. Her father and even her brother didn't believe much anymore... And even after her mother died, Vyla still had hope. Hope that Aslan and the Sons of Adam and the Daughters of Eve would come to save Narnia from the White Witch's grasp just like the prophecy foretold. But she wasn't expecting her heroes to be four kids who had never stepped foot into Narnia. But when she's captured by the White Witch and ends up meeting one of them, all of a sudden, she becomes wrapped up in the fight she never thought she would be in. Highest Ranks #1 in peterpevensie #1 in narnia #1 in cslewis #1 in susan #1 in lucypevensie #1 in susanpevensie #1 in thechroniclesofnarnia #4 in peter #5 in edmund #11 in lucy {The Chronicles of Narnia belong to C.S. Lewis and Disney but the main character, Vyla, her brother, and her parents and their dialogue, and any scenes and characters I add in are my own. But a lot of the plots and dialogue belong to C.S. Lewis and Disney as well.}

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