On My Mind {Suspian}

On My Mind {Suspian}

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Slowly, she folded the letter from her sister. Her mind overflowed with thoughts and her blood burdened with envy. She was conflicted with mixed emotions. She knew she had left an effect on Caspian but she hadn't realised it had been so strong; She also knew he had left an effect on her; Occasionally, he'd appeared in her dreams. They would dance under the incandescent sky and intertwined their hearts with every-step. Their laughter was like symphonies to deafened ears; Gently, they would dance; their eyes wouldn't leave each others until the sun kissed the dawn and made the horizon a vast array of reality. Only then would she wake up and feel empty. - *Unedited* - Written over 4 years - It's been a few weeks since Lucy, Edmund and Eustace returned from Narnia. Susan is in America with her mother. She has made a new friend but something is missing in her life. Lucy writes Susan letters monthly, except this time Susan wasn't expecting to read what she saw. Especially not the letter she received from someone who wasn't Lucy; but someone she loved just as much. Became #5 in Pevensies, #1 in princecaspian & #1 in Suspian #WATTYS2018 • Cover by @tomlinsay •
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"You're so beautiful" He whispered, the both of them shocked that he actually said it to her in the voice he had said in it. He didn't regret it one bit though, he wanted her to know that he liked her, liked her more than a friend. "I bet there are more beautiful women Finnchley " She whispered to him and he shook his head weaving his fingers into her hair and through it before putting his hand on her cheek. "I never paid attention to any of the women in Finnchley" He whispered to her. "None of them ever caught my attention" She looked at him with a smile on his face. She couldn't take it anymore and reached up kissing him. He was shocked but kissed her back without hesitation. She smiled widely wrapping her arms around his neck as his arms went around her waist.~~~~Peter Pevensie Love Story, Narnia This is fanfiction. I only own Elizabeth and other original characters and her plot. The rest goes towards the creators and directors of Narnia.

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