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Ongoing, First published Mar 27, 2018
She's a human.
He's a robot. 
She lives in Paris, under the protective dome.
He operates in the toxic and unbreathable Suburb. 
She's struggling to give meaning to her life.
He's fighting to stay alive. 
How will they react when their destinies crash into each other?


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Rym Skanda is an upper class teenage intern. She lives in Paris. She works as an EXOP leader, leading robots in the Suburb to look after the thousands of externs living there and track down terrorists. 
Her deadly relationship with her father leads her to register in the Criterium competition on a whim. She will have to face 9 other interns and 10 externs to stay in Paris. If she fails, she'll be sent to live in the Dangerous and toxic Suburb forever. 

16 is a robot. He operates in the Suburb and spends his days fighting terrorists. But 16 has got personal problems : he's overwhelmed by many bugs and inaccurate thoughts that put him at risk of being deactivated. He then starts a hopeless fight to hide his secrets, understand their origin and stay alive, in a ruined world where nothing is ever to be taken for granted...
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