The Determined Child
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(remake of Frisk's Story! enjoy ;3)
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she ran up the mountain..trying to escape what she called "home"..
all she could hear was the harsh beating of her heart and her quick but heavy breaths..
her lungs are burning..her legs are aching..but she keeps going..
she's determined to escape..to escape the nightmare she lived in..
as she got into this little cave.. she ended up tripping on a vine..being plunged into internal darkness..her life..her memories..all flashing infront of her as she falls to her death..
so she thinks..
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