Let Me Love You. (BOOK ONE)
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|| I can see the pain behind your eyes || Elizabeth pulled her eyes away from her mother, sniffling. Of course she didn't wanna be in Erudite anymore. But there was nothing she could do about it. || It's been there for quite a while. || Jeanine scowled at her crying daughter, something she hated. She loved but the child, but hated when the girl cried. || I just wanna be the one what it is to smile. || Jeanine frowned and pulled the small girl into her arms. "Just let me love you." she whispered into Elizabeth's hair. || Let me love you. ||
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