A story I've been writing in my free time. Usually write when i'm on public transport or in a boring uni session. posting on here for thoughts and opinions. Constructive criticism appreciated.
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This is my first story. There might be a hell lot mistakes but pls don't mind. Comments are really needed for me to improve. I would appreciate negative comments also.