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Last published Sat, Apr 27, 2019
Uh read
If you want to know
What I personally think
Makes a story better
Ofc I'm going to be bashing people while also having badly structured sentences n fake words n slang so yes, let me rephrase:
Read if u wanna see my trash and worthless opinion of what makes a story better in my unqualified eyes
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Remember that I am not a professional and that whatever I say can be invalid if you want it to be :)
Unless it's about grammar. (I may be wrong at some points but often I take info from trusted grammar sites so-)
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