Unforgivable

What I was aiming for in this story, was for it to be emotional, inspiring, and of cause enjoyable. All of my ideas are original but please its always nice to have new ideas handed to me, so feel free to comment what you would like to see more of. My first book so I apologize in advance if you thinks it sucks. Like, comment, vote and hope you enjoy ;)
P.S read at own risk
Thank you. ;)