Bittersweet (FINISHED)

Bittersweet (FINISHED)

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Once you past the Test of Responsibility, you only have to wait days until your Day of Gifts, the day you receive your own personalised weapon based on your strengths and personality. Most people get ordinary weapons, but Maddie... she gets something a little more unique. Wisps of smoke rose from psychedelic candles and drifted like ghosts over the boxes at Miss Plaskett's feet. Each face was painted with an excitement so strong that it escalated into tension which spread like an incurable disease. It is our Day of Gifts. Ellie is first. Miss hands over the box, which is the second smallest in the pile of rectangular, brown cuboids. Ripping open the box with glee, she carefully yanks out a shiny, red flamethrower. Of course, it suits her fiery personality. She won't know how to use it yet, but the chances are none of us will. That's what the rest of today is for - rather than ordinary, boring, endless lessons, we get trained in how to wield our new weapons. It became law that once a student over the age of 11 can pass the Test of Responsibility, they may receive their weapon, suited to their strengths and personality. That means that everyone can only wield their own weapon, and there will be no more weapons in the world. No nuclear bombs, or shooter aircraft. Just our own personal weapons. It's for peace. .................................................................................................................................................................. Hello! I have gone back and edited the story slightly where I felt it needed changing, which is mostly just minor changes that I felt are important in the sequel. This includes the change of name and cover, as I felt it didn't represent the story as a whole and was too long. I hope you enjoy it!
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I WROTE THIS 2 YEARS AGO AND MY WRITING STYLE HAS CHANGED A LOT SINCE THEN. THE ONLY REASON I HAVEN'T TAKEN THIS DOWN IS SENTIMENTALITY. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sophia Dawn is a nerd that is bullied on a daily basis until she starts hanging out with 4 other social outcasts. When her invention at the science fair gets sabotaged and explodes, all five of them, herself, Liz Thorn, Jake Light, Mike Sharp and Charlie King gain superpowers. ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~- I am Greek, so if you notice any grammatical or vocabulary mistakes, please don't be rude about it! Just tell me in the comments and I will correct them. Also, this is the first story I publish and I know it is lame, but I do it for the experience. I know it is horrible and everything goes really fast and slow at the same time and there are plot-holes and so many other damn things that I can't count at the moment... Anyway. I hope you won't be too harsh, as I told you I am here for the experience and harsh comments are bound to exist. I can't prevent you from posting them, just please make them as little hurtful as possible, not only for me, but also for yourselves. I really hate blocking people. And if the rude comments are too much I will delete and never post again. Not threatening, just warning. Thank you for your time!!! Also, I am not trying to show JUST the action behind the masks, but also, mainly, the struggle when balancing a life like this. Apart from that, I want to make it kind of dramatic. ;)

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