STAR WARS: EPISODE VII - THE LAST JEDI (with a better story)
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  • Reads 7,112
  • Votes 211
  • Parts 23
  • Time 6h 10m
Complete, First published Apr 05, 2018
I didn't like the Last Jedi. Had a lot of problems with how certain characters were handled, and missed opportunities. So, I decided I could do it better myself.  Enjoy. (currently doing some light editing)
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Be My Light

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Reylo fanfic! It's dark. No light to be seen. Are my eyes closed? I feel the darkness eating me. Make it stop! I don't want this! Loud laughter breaks the silence. The laughter sends chills down my spine. "Your punishment is far from over Ren." I recognize the cracky, old voice. Snoke. "Lord Snoke, it's been a year now. I think I've redeemed myself. I'm fully d-" "You let my greatest weapon get destroyed! You lost a fight to a untrained scavenger! You lost the map to Skywalker! And you tell me you've redeemed yourself! You are far from redemption Ren!" His yelling booms through my head. "I-I-I killed my father to be fully dark, nothing can effect me no-" "You killed your father in hope! In hope that the dark will take you! I sense light Ren. I sense light in you. You're doubting the dark. I will make you love the dark. I will make that light disappear inside of you. You will be dark. You will be dark."