Something in the Wind [Undergoing Editing]

Something in the Wind [Undergoing Editing]

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Twenty years ago, a man was slaughtered in the cemetery. They found him sprawled on the ground with huge teeth marks in his neck, with all of his blood drained from his body. Ten years later, the same thing happened to a girl. Sprawled on the grass, all of her blood drained. Elizabeth Grayson never payed much attention to these happenings, telling her five friends, "It was something of the past". When Halloween is just around the corner, Elizabeth comes up with an idea that the rest of her friends aren't very fond of. They try to convince her it's a bad idea, but the decision is made. They are going to the cemetery to spend Halloween night, watching the full moon and looking for "the murderer". But soon, they realize that what they've decided on was a big mistake waiting to happen. They encounter a hideous creature that wants something from them. Something they never expected. He wants Elizabeth, and he's not about to let her out of his grasp. He's ready. Ready to take her life.
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(DISCLAIMER: I know there are a lot of grammatical errors so please don't point them out. Proceed at your own accord.) (Working on a MAJOR and COMPLETE rewrite, the plot will be the same but I've grown as a writer over the past 5 years and I'm ready to make this story the best it can be, I'll post an announcement on my page when the rewrite is completed (: ) Lina Malkovich is about to enter the world of power, money and immortality. Halloween night Lina and her friends visit her towns greatest mystery, the Volkov Mansion. Believed to be abandoned for years they enter and wander around, what they find inside is something they never could have imagined. Alexander Volkov (believed to be dead for several hundred years) is waiting for them grinning and hungry. But something strange happens, he offers her a deal. "You shall serve me. You will be my slave and cater to my every need or desire. This is my only and final offer." Lina agrees and gets herself into much more than she bargained for.

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