The true reality

The true reality

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So, this is basically a story about stuff that actually happened to me but kind of dramatised. I'm still working on it, there are already seven chapters so I'm going to upload them in a few hours or even minutes. I'll start with the intro, please tell me what you are thinking about it to help me to change stuff and also to improve my writing skills. There may be grammar mistakes (since my mother tongue is German), if so, please tell me as well. I would really appreciate your help. Introduction Rin was a little girl, rather small for the tender age of 16, always happy and caring about others but little did they know that she was suffering most of the time. All of it started back then, when she was just 6 years old she already tried to commit suicide but she was saved - her big brother, Chris... He grabbed her by her arm and pulled her away from the high cliff once he noticed that she was gone. He had always been there for her, they were inseparable until he met the love of his life, since then everything just got worse. She had been lonely since then, not being able to deal with the pain anymore since she was all on her own. Nobody would understand her, her friends would only ask her for favours and would only come to her if they needed something but she still accepted them as her friends because it was better than getting bullied. She made a big mistake back then, she bullied others, not thinking about the consequences, until now, as of late she has been getting bullied by her old classmates. She didn't know that she would have to go through such a terrible time of school - her childhood was hard enough for her and not to forget about the moving away from her old hometown, there was only one good thing about it, Rin would be able to get away from home, her old classmates and every person she had met until now. The bad thing was, communication is something she was terrible at, what is she supposed to do once she arrives there? And what about her new job?
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**A/N** I STARTED WRITING THIS STORY WHEN I WAS 14 SO YOU OBVIOUSLY CAN'T EXPECT IT TO BE GOLD..JUST SAYING.. I KNOW THIS ISN'T REALLY HELPING MY STORY, BUT....THE BEGINNING WRITING IS ROUGH. I'VE TRIED TO FIX IT AS BEST I COULD BUT...IT IS WHAT IT IS. IT DOES GET BETTER THOUGH.** A/N 2. If you're looking for smut in this story, I'm sorry but there isn't any. I was uncomfortable writing such things at the age I was when I started writing this. A/N 3. Before you read: It will seem very cliche for the first few chapters, but then more drama reaches into the story. There are some depressing parts in this story, for your heads up. Please Comment or Vote or Fan. If you have any suggestions, please comment on the latest chapter (: This is my FIRST fanfic :P gimme some slack ;) Running away from home isn't necessarily an easy thing to do, but Colena Smith doesn't care, she's going to do it anyways. She's met up with the biggest boyband in the world in complete coincidence, and it's not long before everyone knows who she is. It's not like she wasn't well known already, as she's the Senator's daughter. Her dark past leaves her tortured in her memories, and causes old actions to return, tearing her and Niall apart. She soon discovers that she's not always who she thinks she is. What if her entire life was just a whole lie? What she doesn't know, though, is that she's contaminated, putting her into almost near death experiences. What will she do to gain revenge and take her life back? How far will her parents go to get her back in their grip? Will her condition take her away from Niall and the rest of the world before she can stop it?

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