Hunting White Raven (Unedited Old Draft)
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THIS STORY IS CURRENTLY BEING RE-WRITTEN. THIS IS THE FIRST PUBLISHING OF THE STORY.
Adi glared at the uncooperative music box on her desk. Leaning back, she crossed her arms in her yellow hoodie. Seventeen years old and here she was, solving yet another mystery. This was getting tiring.
When Adi's friend disappears without a warning, one hostile clue is the only indication of where he could be. She recruits backup to embark on an adventure that she was not prepared for- one that decides the fate of humanity. The troop is pulled into conspiratorial chaos and Adi can only hope that she can play the game long enough to keep her friends alive. Forced to seek help from an organization she planned on forgetting, Adi must ask herself if she is willing to sacrifice her life.
Adi crosses paths with an infuriatingly handsome man who makes her doubt everything she thought she knew about the "bad guys". The rope of commitment she's been hanging on to is starting to fray and it's slowly driving her to the edge of sanity. Adi lacks the confidence to answer her questions and carry everyone else's burdens, so how could she possibly save an entire world?
A thrilling and action-packed story of choices, betrayal, and secrets, Hunting White Raven begs the question of humanity's fate. Set in a world of high tech and crime amidst the destruction of government and a fatal plague, Hunting White Raven exhibits the thrilling aspects of conspiracies and twisted romance.
This story does not contain vulgar language or sexual content, but viewer discretion is advised for mild violence. Recommended 14+
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