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Allegiant alternate ending

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I know we are all terribly upset with how sad the allegiant ending was (I bawled for hours), soooo here's what I think should've happened.         **all characters and settings and everything belong to Veronica Roth, I am simply just another (upset) fan trying to make things better!!**     Oooooo annnd contains MAJOR spoilers, you have been warned. *update when I can!!! Crazy busy, but I'll try to get them done!*All Rights Reserved

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Defiant by TaylorJones125

This is how I think Allegiant should have ended. They deserved a life. And family. They went through too much. So here is my idea of how it should have ended: Tris prior survived the weapons lab and tobias saved her. What will they do now? Will they live in peace now that the factions have been reinstated? What happens when a new group called the defiant start preparing fOr a war? The friends and family they thought dead start showing up alive. How? Who else is alive? What happens when a little bit of family shows up in tobias' life. What happens when a girl shows up tris never thought she would meet? Can they really trust the defiant? What will tris and Tobias do now that they also have a family to look after. Can they ever really be safe? All rights to Veronica Roth. I don't own any of the characters or ideas.

What could have happend by LittleCrumb4568

A divergent no war story What if Tobias has a sister? What if Eric was nice behind his mean aperance? What if the war never happend? What if...? That were the questions that spooked through my head, so i decided to answer them through my own fanfiction. I know it's an overused topic but i got inspired by other fanfictions so here i am, writing my own. Thats what life's about writing your story. So here is my version of a divergent no war story. Have fun and be brave! <3 The divergent story belongs to Veronica Roth, the divergent world and most of the characters belong to her! I'm only telling the story and I'm adding a few story lines. I repeat: Most of the characters in this story don't belong to me, they belong to the genius Veronica Roth! Warning!: There is talk about abuse! Read at your own risk!

Allegiant Alternate Ending by Suniedaze

Like so many others, I was not happy with the way Allegiant ended. I thought Veronica Roth did a beautiful job of writing Tobias's perspective after Tris's death, but I felt like her death was meaningless because it could have been avoided. Having her die because she forgot her gun in the hallway was an insult to her character. Tris was way too smart for that. I needed their happy ending as well as one that did the characters justice. (I don't own any of the characters or the story. All the credit goes to Veronica Roth )

The New Initiates by KristenTruman

Okay guys, this is my first go at a divergent Fanfic. I don't own divergent, or most of the characters. if you are interested in being in this story, message me. this Fanfic is set as if certain events from divergent/ insurgent/ allegiant never happened (although I love all of those books) Please comment with constructive criticism, don't be too harsh. Pretty much everything belongs to Veronica Roth. enjoy.

Divergent no-war. by hgrier13

This is my first fan fiction. I know the no war idea is used a lot but this is my take on what should have happened. Please comment what you think!!!!!!!!! ...........................ALL RIGHTS TO VERONCIA ROTH....................... Everything is hers except some new characters.

Divergent High by Lauren_is_Divergent

*In Editing* I know this idea had been done before, but I feel like doing my own take on a classic. I always wanted to try a Divergent IRL and I didn't want it to be after the placements of the real book. ---------- Four is the new guy at divergent high. He gets drooled on by all the girls, but he always has his eyes on someone else. Through secrets, heartbreak and betrayal, will he end up with his beauty?

Allegiant - alternate ending by oneearth

The Allegiant ending was not so bad but it made me empty. There were two reasons why I did not like it. Firstly the sacrifice as it is now seems useless to me. For Caleb it was more another grief than help (not thinking about Four...). And the second is the fact that they still didn't solve anything. There was no use of her divergence, if this did not help the word to become better, to find a solution for all these people from the fringe ... I really don't think that her mother would be happy is the story would ended like this. All characters all belong to Veronica Roth, but I changed/added some parts! At the beginning I did only minor changes in existing chapters, but then everything is new. THIS STORY CONTAINS ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! Thank you so much for the reads, votes, and comments!!! I am sorry for grammatical and other mistakes in the text - I am not a native (English) speaker.

Disremembered (Fourtris story) by FourTris_HEA

What happens when one lover forgets, while the other is desperate for them to remember. True love lasts forever. But what if it doesn't? Tris survives the shooting in Allegiant - only to return and learn that the Tobias she knows and loves - did not. With his memories gone - will Tobias go back to her, or continue to move on with someone else? How much will Tris be willing to take before moving on herself. dis•re•mem•ber (ˌdɪs rɪˈmɛm bər) v.t. to forget. ****************************************************************************** ****************************************************************************** An alternative ending to Veronica Roth's Allegiant. Disclaimer~ I don't own the characters Veronica Roth does DISCLAIMER: This story contains implied adult-intimate-situations, minor foul language, and mild violence.

mended vs. settLed (a FOURTRIS love story) by FourTris_HEA

Summary: Tobias is devastated when Tris, the love of his life, dies the day the memory serum is released at the bureau. In his grief, he attempts to take the memory serum in order to wipe away his pain, Tris's best friend stops him. Christina helps him to see that Tris would have hated him erasing her from his mind, she told him "The person you became with her is worth being." A year passes as Tobias develops a close friendship with Christina, she then pushes him to move on from his grief, to live his life and just move forward. They begin a romantic relationship. This story will begin as one couple is just beginning and then a true love is discovered to still be alive. The difficulties all face as they move forward. There is mending and then there is settling. +++++o++++++o+++++ This is a fourtris love story, of angst, healing and romance. A lot of angst. This will not be a Fourstina, Tostina, etc, story (aka settling). If you have strong feelings about Fourstina - this is not going to be the story for you. Disclaimer: An alternative ending to Veronica Roth's Allegiant. Third book in The Divergent Series. An alternate point of view/interpretation of epilogue, We Can Be Mended by Veronica Roth. Rights/Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters, Veronica Roth does DISCLAIMER: This story contains adult-intimate-situations, strong language, and mild physical and emotional violence.

Reunited ( tris is alive) by IReadBooksLikeCrazy

After Allegiant, tris wakes up and figures out she never died, but everyone thinks she was, she was simply in a comma for a year then tested on for another.When her and Tobias Reunite will they finally get the normal life they deserve?Updated at least once a week, I plan to make this as long as an actual book. All credit to Veronica Roth for her Characters. Think I should keep writing?comment on chapter 20 and tell me if I should!

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Divergent no-war. cover

Divergent High cover

Allegiant - alternate ending cover

Disremembered (Fourtris story) cover

mended vs. settLed (a FOURTRIS love story) cover

Reunited ( tris is alive) cover

Defiant

This is how I think Allegiant should have ended. They deserved a life. And family. They went through too much. So here is my idea of how it should have ended: Tris prior survived the weapons lab and tobias saved her. What will they do now? Will they live in peace now that the factions have been reinstated? What happens when a new group called the defiant start preparing fOr a war? The friends and family they thought dead start showing up alive. How? Who else is alive? What happens when a little bit of family shows up in tobias' life. What happens when a girl shows up tris never thought she would meet? Can they really trust the defiant? What will tris and Tobias do now that they also have a family to look after. Can they ever really be safe? All rights to Veronica Roth. I don't own any of the characters or ideas.