Kingdoms of Races

This is my first story I have ever even submitted so that others can read. I would like if you gave me tips if there is something I could change while I write.

In a world where all is one and one is all.
Someone stands out in the crowds.
She was the one to hide and the one to fight.
But she still wants to class and sass
when all is glass.
(I know everything doesn't rhyme )
The land of the different races is a big chain of islands one for each race. The island are connected by huge bridges connecting them all to an artificial island in the middle. the only rule that are applied to all the islands are that no one is to go to another island that isn't your own.
Karotiania the Island of the human race and the next biggest island in the chain.
Wakancia the island of the werewolves and the biggest island of them all.
Larantic the island of mermaids and the most beautiful island in the chain.
Halandria the island of the vampires and the darkest island in the chain.
Galantria the island of the dragons with big mountains on it.
And Alangriance the island of the pheonixes.
Almost all the islands have a name except for one they all call it the island of the rouges where only a few different species and out of the few different species there is about five people on the entire island. Some people adore them as they are rebels while some hate them.

My name is Kitz and I am living on the human island, but I'm not human but at the same time I am.
I am a shapeshifter and right now people are trying to hunt me down for being what I am. Sadly my bright white hair and blue/violet eyes stand out greatly with the small spots of black and white in them making me even more unique.
This is my story.

(Hope you like it :) )