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The Visit

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Time 3h 23m

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Lizette takes Avi home to her family so he can meet her brothers. There's a conversation he wants to have with them, a burning question he is honor bound to ask. His entire future depends on the answer to that question. 

He'd already met her parents and spent the better part of a week learning how to fit into a family he was welcomed into with open arms. He can only hope that her brothers will accept him as readily as her parents had.

Lizzie has someplace special back home she wants to share with Avi. She can hardly wait to get him alone out there. She hopes and prays that her brothers will at least like the love of her life. She can't possibly know how they might feel about the man that keeps her half the country away from them. She can only hope that they'll be nice to him.

Follow Avi and Lizzie on yet another adventure as they explore their relationship and new ones in their lives are formed. Will Her brothers accept Avi? Will he have the courage to ask them the question he has for them? Find out in "The Visit"All Rights Reserved

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Loved And Hated by Little1Writer

"We want you home Sorella" Mason said to me. "I couldn't give two shits what you want." I said back. He looked pissed. I could feel someone coming towards me with a needle aimed at my neck. Elijah and Everly are two identical twin girls. Elijah was suppose to be a boy, but kept the name nether the less. They look the exact same, except for the eyes. Eli has her Fathers, whereas Everly has her Mothers. Their parents loved the twins, Well Everly. Her mum and step-dad hated Elijah with a passion. Whereas Everly was treated like a princess, Elijah was treated like something on the back of their shoe. Until one day, they both got called into the office to find out they both died in a car crash. Everly cried as Elijah sat stone-faced. They also find out that they have five older brothers. Five Controlling and annoying older brothers with a huge secret of their own. Not forgetting that Eli refuses to become part of their life. Everly is enough for them in her eyes. Will Elijah survive on her own? Or will her brothers drag her home? And will she stay? Badass- #1 Twins - #1 Running - #1 Mafiaprincess - #1 Brothers - #1 Brother - #1 Father-daughter - #1 Family - #4 out of 246k stories

𝐅𝐀𝐌𝐈𝐋𝐘 | ✔︎ by Emma200020011

𝐂𝐎𝐌𝐏𝐋𝐄𝐓𝐄𝐃 (This is NOT an incest story!!) 19 year old Avyana, also a very known assassin in the underworld known as Angel, living with her twin Alessio. For the first 5 years of the twins' lives, they lived happily with their two parents and 5 older brothers. On the twins' 5th birthday, they were taken by the German mafia, their family's worst enemy. The Morettis are heartbroken because the light in their dark world was taken. Alessio and Avyana hate their family because they think their family gave them up and caused them the abuse and torture they've endured. When the twins end up moving to New York, where their family lives, for a mission, will they happen to run into their family whom they hate? Will family recognize the twins? Can the twins ever forgive their family? When Avyana's dark past creeps back into her life, will she tell Alessio? Will her family find out before its too late?... Or will they lose their daughter for good this time. Will Avyana sacrifice herself for her family's sake? Will she get the happy ending she deserves? ••• ❝Oh my God." I breathe out, tears welling up in my eyes. "I know I've been busy with work and my mafia, but I thought we needed a little date night. Just the two of us." he says, wiping a tear from my cheek that I didn't realize had fallen. "Kayden, t-this is amazing! I love it!" I stutter and jump on him, which he catches me, and I cling like a koala. "I love you to the moon and beyond." I mumble into his neck, and he tightens his hold on me. "I love you more, baby. Always. To the moon and beyond." He rasps into my ear, and when I let go of him, we just stare into eachothers eyes for a second. Just him and I.❞ __________________________________________________________________________________ 𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐑𝐓𝐄𝐃 - July 9th, 2024 𝐅𝐈𝐍𝐈𝐒𝐇𝐄𝐃 - Dec 19th, 2024

Moving Day by JSBarr

Moving Day. The saga of Avi and Lizzie continues in this sweet little tale. After some wild adventures and frightening dreams, Moving Day has arrived for Avriel and Lizette. Avi's little apartment seemed to get smaller and smaller day after day after Lizette moved in. Feeling cramped and uncomfortable living with the love of his life, Avi suggested they find a bigger place. Luckily she agrees and the search begins. New furniture, new home it's all exciting and fun until a small run-in with her ex-boyfriend triggers a horrible nightmare. Walk with Avi and Lizzie as they sort it all out and find a way to work through their fears and concerns in this simple little story of love, compassion, patience, growth, and understanding. J.S. Barr Look for a new adventure in "Parents" Coming Soon

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Neil loves Avni and so does Avni..!! ❣️Both are unaware of this love...!! Circumstances forced them to be apart..!! But their love stays..!!🤗 After 15 years.. They collided.. Will they be able to recognize each other..? Will the love blossom or they would still be unaware..? 💕 Cute story on our own AVNEIL..! ❤ Let's peep into the story to know about their story.. 🤗🤗 Different story.. Same essence.. It's called love❤❤

Meeting Shelly by JSBarr

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Parents by JSBarr

Avi and Lizette's adventure continue in Parents. Read and see how both react when a little extra love is thrown into their mix. Lizette and Avi have been dating for nearly a year. After a short stint of living together in Avi's small apartment, they moved into a bigger house. Life is wonderful, beautiful, and all that they want it to be. When Lizette's parents come to visit LA they stay with Lizzie and Avi things get a little crazy for them. Even though they only stay for a little more than a week, it calls for an adjustment in a stable and happy home as nerves and anxiety increase, while tension builds. Avi is forced to adjust to the changes in his home for the short period of time that Lizzie's parents are staying with them. He likes things a specific way. His home, his kitchen, his pots and pans, his girl, anywhere, anytime they feel the need. Will he be able to make the changes he needs to make, even temporarily, to survive the arrival of her parents? He's feared the day he had to meet them since the day he met her. He wondered if he'd have the courage to ask her father the one question that was burning in his mind. Would he get the answer he desired? And if he did would he be able to keep his mouth shut long enough for it to remain a surprise? He's been searching for just the right ring for what had come to feel like forever to him. After months of searching all he could find was the band that he desperately wanted to wear. Will he find the ring he's been looking for and if he does will he have the strength he needs to carry out his plans? Read this tale of love, function, sacrifice, patience, and understanding and find out. J.S. Barr

Yeh Ishq nahi aasaan💕💕 by writerrahman01

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Pizza & Wings by JSBarr

Finally, the girl from Snowed In has a name. Follow Her and Avi as their journey continues in Pizza and Wings. Written in the style of "First Date" This story will take you on an emotional journey full of ups and downs. All Avi wanted was Pizza & Wings. What he got was a whole lot of trouble and a broken heart. After an extremely difficult and trying two weeks at the studio Avi has a chance to unwind and let his hair down. He thought he sent a text to his best friend letting him know that his girlfriend was out of town and asking if he wanted to hang out, get drunk and get into trouble together, or did he send it to his girlfriend? He lost his phone and was extremely late picking her up from the airport. He knows he's in trouble, but how much trouble can he be in? After two long weeks of watching her boyfriend withdraw and struggle, Lizette is pulled away to the opposite side of the country to do her job. Its the first time they have ever been that far apart. When she receives a very suspicious text from her boyfriend, she does her best to keep her cool, but after serval attempts of trying to contact him, she assumes the worse and his failure to pick her up at the airport, she assumes the worse. When he finally finds her he stands accused and afraid. Can their love for one another withstand the odd circumstances that conspired to leave them in their situation? Will a simple miscommunication and gross misunderstanding spell the end for these two lovers or will they find the strength they need in each other to overcome and thrive? J.S. Barr

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"We want you home Sorella" Mason said to me. "I couldn't give two shits what you want." I said back. He looked pissed. I could feel someone coming towards me with a needle aimed at my neck. Elijah and Everly are two identical twin girls. Elijah was suppose to be a boy, but kept the name nether the less. They look the exact same, except for the eyes. Eli has her Fathers, whereas Everly has her Mothers. Their parents loved the twins, Well Everly. Her mum and step-dad hated Elijah with a passion. Whereas Everly was treated like a princess, Elijah was treated like something on the back of their shoe. Until one day, they both got called into the office to find out they both died in a car crash. Everly cried as Elijah sat stone-faced. They also find out that they have five older brothers. Five Controlling and annoying older brothers with a huge secret of their own. Not forgetting that Eli refuses to become part of their life. Everly is enough for them in her eyes. Will Elijah survive on her own? Or will her brothers drag her home? And will she stay? Badass- #1 Twins - #1 Running - #1 Mafiaprincess - #1 Brothers - #1 Brother - #1 Father-daughter - #1 Family - #4 out of 246k stories