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The Visit

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Time 3h 23m

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Lizette takes Avi home to her family so he can meet her brothers. There's a conversation he wants to have with them, a burning question he is honor bound to ask. His entire future depends on the answer to that question. 

He'd already met her parents and spent the better part of a week learning how to fit into a family he was welcomed into with open arms. He can only hope that her brothers will accept him as readily as her parents had.

Lizzie has someplace special back home she wants to share with Avi. She can hardly wait to get him alone out there. She hopes and prays that her brothers will at least like the love of her life. She can't possibly know how they might feel about the man that keeps her half the country away from them. She can only hope that they'll be nice to him.

Follow Avi and Lizzie on yet another adventure as they explore their relationship and new ones in their lives are formed. Will Her brothers accept Avi? Will he have the courage to ask them the question he has for them? Find out in "The Visit"All Rights Reserved

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Fangirl ↬ Kavi by ashlxy-

〝 we both left the men's bathroom and i sat down. "you're something, kirstie," avi said as he sat down next to me. "is that a good or a bad thing?" i asked. "it's a good thing," avi smiled. i smiled, too. "that's great. but if my feet become bruised, you owe me a mcdouble from mcdonald's."〞 kirstie maldonado's a fangirl of a talented singer named avi kaplan. she's helplessly in love with the guy and one day she happened to spot him in a grocery market, and the first thing she does is ask him if she could touch his beard. combine an obsessive fangirl and her idol, and out comes a whole lot of confusion, violence, threats, and even love. { completed }

When Love Bites by JSBarr

Things were going just fine for Avi and Lizzie, they were happy and they were in love, but since they moved in together their relationship began to fall apart. Valentine's Day is fast approaching and there is trouble in paradise. While Avi starts missing more and more texts, forgetting important things and spending more time with Marisa, his best friend and studio mate, Lizzie finds herself in need of more personal freedom regarding the knowledge of her dating life, a little more honesty and a lot more give from Avi. The tensions rise when Lizzie goes out with her guy friends and comes home late and drunk. Her friends don't believe her when she tells them she has a boyfriend. They think she made him up, her guy friends too. It threatens to drive her crazy and puts a wedge between her and Avi. Can he give her what she is asking of him and can she let go of the guy friends that Avi doesn't care for? The answer to these questions and more lie in When Love Bites, A Valentine's Story.

Yeh Ishq nahi aasaan💕💕 by writerrahman01

Avni & Neil fell in love with each other in college but unaware that their families are enemies from last 20 yrs. What will happen when they got to know about it ?? What will happen when their families got to know about their love ?? Will they ever become avneil or destiny will seperates their path ?? Cover credit: @CutieIshh

Moonlight & Water by JSBarr

It's been nearly a year since they went on their first date, but he knew from the moment they shared their first conversation that she was his one. Distracted by the plans he's making, Avi becomes increasingly less aware of Lizzie's feelings, suddenly he's missing dates and disappearing, forgetting to keep the near constant contact they happily share alive. Lizzie is trying to be patient with him and to understand. She wants to help him, the love of her life with whatever it is that he is struggling through. Quite frankly, she tired of being ignored and receiving noncommittal responses from the man that she'd grown to know and instantly loved, but he's being squirrely, downright flaky. When will it stop? His best friend even seems to be in on it. What in the world has gotten into her precious Avriel and how can she fix it? Follow Avi and Lizzie on one more adventure as their first anniversary approaches. Will he finally tell her what's weighing on his mind? Will she be ready to hear what he has to say?

Moving Day by JSBarr

Moving Day. The saga of Avi and Lizzie continues in this sweet little tale. After some wild adventures and frightening dreams, Moving Day has arrived for Avriel and Lizette. Avi's little apartment seemed to get smaller and smaller day after day after Lizette moved in. Feeling cramped and uncomfortable living with the love of his life, Avi suggested they find a bigger place. Luckily she agrees and the search begins. New furniture, new home it's all exciting and fun until a small run-in with her ex-boyfriend triggers a horrible nightmare. Walk with Avi and Lizzie as they sort it all out and find a way to work through their fears and concerns in this simple little story of love, compassion, patience, growth, and understanding. J.S. Barr Look for a new adventure in "Parents" Coming Soon

The Arrangement by LoraWhite6

Kirsten never has time for love and romance. She spent all of her time studying in college and when she got out into the working world she devoted her life to her job. She has made a few close friends that she hangs out with and that's the extent of her social life. Her family (especially her mother) all give her a hard time about her love life or lack there of. When her baby sister gets engaged they really put the pressure on her since she will now be the only one that isn't "settled down" yet. To appease her family, she decides to bring a date to her sister's wedding. The only problem is she has no idea who she is going to find. Her friends help her find someone and the person they pick is the complete opposite of Kirsten. What will happen? Will Kirsten give love a shot? Do opposites really attract? From the book... You can't tell me you don't feel something when I do this...." He says as he trails his fingers down my arm. Goosebumps in his path betray me, letting him know he is in fact effecting me. "Or when I do this...." He says as he grabs the back of my neck forcing me to look into his eyes. Again the small sigh I let out betrays me. "Especially...when I do this." He finishes before smashing his lips to mine. Warning: Contains graphic sexual content and language. This is your only warning. Read at your own risk!

Pizza & Wings by JSBarr

Finally, the girl from Snowed In has a name. Follow Her and Avi as their journey continues in Pizza and Wings. Written in the style of "First Date" This story will take you on an emotional journey full of ups and downs. All Avi wanted was Pizza & Wings. What he got was a whole lot of trouble and a broken heart. After an extremely difficult and trying two weeks at the studio Avi has a chance to unwind and let his hair down. He thought he sent a text to his best friend letting him know that his girlfriend was out of town and asking if he wanted to hang out, get drunk and get into trouble together, or did he send it to his girlfriend? He lost his phone and was extremely late picking her up from the airport. He knows he's in trouble, but how much trouble can he be in? After two long weeks of watching her boyfriend withdraw and struggle, Lizette is pulled away to the opposite side of the country to do her job. Its the first time they have ever been that far apart. When she receives a very suspicious text from her boyfriend, she does her best to keep her cool, but after serval attempts of trying to contact him, she assumes the worse and his failure to pick her up at the airport, she assumes the worse. When he finally finds her he stands accused and afraid. Can their love for one another withstand the odd circumstances that conspired to leave them in their situation? Will a simple miscommunication and gross misunderstanding spell the end for these two lovers or will they find the strength they need in each other to overcome and thrive? J.S. Barr

𝐇𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞 : 𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐦𝐨𝐧𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 by lizziexsblood

*COMPLETED* AN/ warning, it's jumps straight in! i'm going to come back and edit it later on. this is my least favourite thing I've written 😭 hope and lizzie's relationship has been tested by many obstacles in their lives, but this journey is different. as they work through hardships, sacrifices, and new monsters they've never encountered, hope and lizzie are pushed to their limits. will they choose each other? or the they love?

Parents by JSBarr

Avi and Lizette's adventure continue in Parents. Read and see how both react when a little extra love is thrown into their mix. Lizette and Avi have been dating for nearly a year. After a short stint of living together in Avi's small apartment, they moved into a bigger house. Life is wonderful, beautiful, and all that they want it to be. When Lizette's parents come to visit LA they stay with Lizzie and Avi things get a little crazy for them. Even though they only stay for a little more than a week, it calls for an adjustment in a stable and happy home as nerves and anxiety increase, while tension builds. Avi is forced to adjust to the changes in his home for the short period of time that Lizzie's parents are staying with them. He likes things a specific way. His home, his kitchen, his pots and pans, his girl, anywhere, anytime they feel the need. Will he be able to make the changes he needs to make, even temporarily, to survive the arrival of her parents? He's feared the day he had to meet them since the day he met her. He wondered if he'd have the courage to ask her father the one question that was burning in his mind. Would he get the answer he desired? And if he did would he be able to keep his mouth shut long enough for it to remain a surprise? He's been searching for just the right ring for what had come to feel like forever to him. After months of searching all he could find was the band that he desperately wanted to wear. Will he find the ring he's been looking for and if he does will he have the strength he needs to carry out his plans? Read this tale of love, function, sacrifice, patience, and understanding and find out. J.S. Barr

Chal meri jaan❤ ( Completed) by MuntahaMafrin

Neil & his childhood bestie...his lady don she was like a fire... . . neil loves her very much bt as a friend . . . she started realise her feelings for neil when he left for London to study . . . he came back bt not alone........ . . she came to know that he loves someone else 💔 💔 💔 here neil loves his lady unconditionally ..he can't live without her..he called her baby as she is like a child who spreads happiness wherever she smiles....her smiles , cute talk can melt anyone's heart bt she is an orphan ______________________________________ now dekhte hai kya hota hai inke life mei😊😊 Avneil short story

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Moonlight & Water cover

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Pizza & Wings cover

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Fangirl ↬ Kavi

〝 we both left the men's bathroom and i sat down. "you're something, kirstie," avi said as he sat down next to me. "is that a good or a bad thing?" i asked. "it's a good thing," avi smiled. i smiled, too. "that's great. but if my feet become bruised, you owe me a mcdouble from mcdonald's."〞 kirstie maldonado's a fangirl of a talented singer named avi kaplan. she's helplessly in love with the guy and one day she happened to spot him in a grocery market, and the first thing she does is ask him if she could touch his beard. combine an obsessive fangirl and her idol, and out comes a whole lot of confusion, violence, threats, and even love. { completed }