The Visit
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  • Reads 1,537
  • Votes 89
  • Parts 13
  • Time 3h 23m
Complete, First published Apr 22, 2018
Mature
Lizette takes Avi home to her family so he can meet her brothers. There's a conversation he wants to have with them, a burning question he is honor bound to ask. His entire future depends on the answer to that question. 

He'd already met her parents and spent the better part of a week learning how to fit into a family he was welcomed into with open arms. He can only hope that her brothers will accept him as readily as her parents had.

Lizzie has someplace special back home she wants to share with Avi. She can hardly wait to get him alone out there. She hopes and prays that her brothers will at least like the love of her life. She can't possibly know how they might feel about the man that keeps her half the country away from them. She can only hope that they'll be nice to him.

Follow Avi and Lizzie on yet another adventure as they explore their relationship and new ones in their lives are formed. Will Her brothers accept Avi? Will he have the courage to ask them the question he has for them? Find out in "The Visit"
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