The Guardians Of Zion

The Guardians Of Zion

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[#60 in aliens on 5/11/2018] ((Excerpt)) Jonah and Zack together - "A GIRL???!!!!" Jonah - "Dude, how? Like a girl never ranks! Not in bid! Not in high draft! Never! Like usually girls become Guardians and then recruit other girls as Disciples for the sake of...well, looking out for each other I guess. And who is Galiera Morte anyways? Have you heard about her?" Zack - "No, I haven't. She must have trained and registered secretly. Maybe she chose not to have herself known as a potential candidate unless drafted. It says she's 15! Why haven't we heard about her until now though? Look at her stats man!" Jonah - "I see man!!! She has an affinity ability and is a marksman with the bow and rifle! She has also mastered multiple martial arts and has a ton of research points! Dude she is like super legit!" Zack - "Yes she is. I don't know man, this is a first. Something about her has to be special to not only be chosen as a Disciple but to be bidded 1st in her class..." ****************************************** In a galaxy, founded by fallible humans, where children are molded to be career-minded, and young adults are trained to be watchers of these children, anything can happen. "Guardian and Disciple. We strive. We stay alive. We survive. With Nature's grace and Zion as our guide." The question is, will everyone see life that way and will they live according to this system? Is this system perfect? Who created it? And why do Guardians have Disciples? CAN THE SYSTEM BE TRUSTED? Not everything that looks good, is. And not every system that seems to be working, does. Not every fact is truth and not all things of value worth the price. All this will be answered in The Guardians of Zion. (Cover by @majesticmountain 😚😊 ) Berserkxxo aka Darius Johnson
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Special Agent Alyssa Caine has been tasked with the most important mission of her life: the assassination of the man who would bring about the end of the world. The only problem? He is already dead. A minor issue that is resolved in the year 2157 when a renegade group of scientists develops a device that allows to jump through time. They recruit the former special agent to send her back fifty years, to take just one man out of the equation, a minimal change with a predicted maximal effect on the fate of the world, and prevent a devastating war that has driven the last surviving humans to live in decrepit underground bunkers. Every action has a consequence. Alyssa is humanity's last hope, and her actions will determine the fate of the whole world. She is willing to sacrifice everything for a better future. But she soon realizes that the impact of her actions might be beyond her control, and beyond all predictions. _____ Highest Rankings: #16 in Science [06.02.2019] #36 in Dystopia [06.02.2019] #65 in FemaleProtagonist [01.02.2019] #71 in TimeTravel [06.02.2019] #1 in Paradox [28.02.2019] #1 in ONC2019 [01.02.2019] #3 in OpenNovellaContest2019 [28.02.2019] This is my entry for the ONC 2019! At first I thought I'd pick something a bit out of my comfort zone (so.... NOT SciFi for once...) to expand my horizon, but when I saw a prompt about time travel I was immediately inspired. Please keep in mind, all of this is WIP! The title, cover, and some of the content might change at any time... I have an outline and I worked hard to come up with a compelling and consistent story line, but due to the nature of the story (timey whimey stuff!) I might have to revise things a few times as I write. I'm grateful for any feedback and I hope you enjoy :)

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