Minumalum Prayers
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NDE in children has a new contribution that they can choose to pursue. With a price. Those who have witnessed the pearly gates of Heaven can have a choice to report their findings by answering a genuine prayer monthly per person. The price for this gift being a sixty percent increased chance of death. A chance many children refuse. The gloomy purple shown in the eyes of the child agent of God after a prayer representing 'no', the glorious orange meaning 'in due time' and the refreshingly sweet 'pink' showing yes.
For more accurate evidence for all to see, God's heavenly cloudy milk white fruit have been sent down in a clear white crate of thirty with an answer to be shown in each apple after the NDE child agent's prayer with the client. When these prophecies become larger than life, can our child agent withstand the riots that arose from a gloomily purple 'no' to their prayer for war, peace or fortune?
Witness Ambassadors, Dictators, Celebrities, Presidents and Armies chase after a child when their prayer is not answered. Can our preteen agent survive mobs and wars coming after her, along with a sixty percent increased chance of death?
An idea inspired by thinking and imagining if white apples existed, and how it would be cool if one of my favorite colors, pink, were inside. Also inspired by, "Heaven is For Real" movie trailers and interviews on youtube, and decided to piece these ideas in together, along with turning it into a journey. Also, to see how dramatic it would be if higher positions were told 'no' by a legit answer to their prayer from Heaven, and how violently they --or the world-- would react.
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