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It's A Secret. Can You Keep It?
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Ongoing, First published Apr 09, 2014
DO NOT READ THIS: i swear, I wrote this when I was like 11, and it's awful, as well as not finished, I am truly sorry for writing this, I know it sucks, and is also really stereotypical in a bad way, idk i just hate it but I can't bring myself to delete it so


(Previously "Can You hear me?")Sixteen year old Sky Richards expected a lot of things when she volunteered to talk to teenagers in coma, she expected it to be the most awkward couple of weeks of her life, she expected to feel like an idiot, they couldn't reply, right? But what she didn't expect was this, she found she could talk about things she 'd never spilled to anyone, secrets she'd never voiced, comforted by the thought that they were too far away from the real world to hear a word of what she said. Little did Sky know, that the boy she talked to could hear, every single word she spoke got etched in his mind, as he slowly started to come out of coma, slowly started to talk again, she realized her mistake, or was it one?
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Meet Sky Field the not so ordinary street orphan girl, that can speak 7 different languages. With very unique force field abilities. It all starts when she is caught with her gang robbing a bank and is sent to juvenile girls detention centre. She is meet by a boy from the future that tells her that she is going to take over the world, bring heaps of depression, death and enslavement. Even though she is a bit of a criminal she secretly wants to be good and tries to save people from being killed. She doesn't want people her age (which is 11)or younger to turn out like her. Her challenge is to overcome her self, her past and her future. She has one choice stay a criminal and stay in the not so friendly jail, or to become a hero and be respected and have people forgive her a lot more. How will her gang respond to her decision to become a hero will they try to kill her or let it go. There is a lady who also knows about what Sky can do and will try to eliminate her at all costs no matter on her decision. So sit tight for some adventure, action and science fiction. (There is no swearing or really gross romantic stuff. Except has quite a bit of violence and some humor, unless my jokes are pathetic. So besides a little bit of violence this story is clean) Anyway she ends up meeting a few enemies Blood Arrow, The Pirate gang( who will stop at nothing to try and kill her) , the Red Dark Flame criminal army and Ernestine (The sociopath that can control Sky's mind.) Anyway I may have made the story sound boring (because I seem to make everything seem boring when i explain in not that much detail.) But trust me I have planned stuff to keep you entertained. I hope you enjoy the story and have a great week. P.S This is my first story so all feedback is wanted, but you don't have to.