It's A Secret. Can You Keep It?
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DO NOT READ THIS: i swear, I wrote this when I was like 11, and it's awful, as well as not finished, I am truly sorry for writing this, I know it sucks, and is also really stereotypical in a bad way, idk i just hate it but I can't bring myself to delete it so
(Previously "Can You hear me?")Sixteen year old Sky Richards expected a lot of things when she volunteered to talk to teenagers in coma, she expected it to be the most awkward couple of weeks of her life, she expected to feel like an idiot, they couldn't reply, right? But what she didn't expect was this, she found she could talk about things she 'd never spilled to anyone, secrets she'd never voiced, comforted by the thought that they were too far away from the real world to hear a word of what she said. Little did Sky know, that the boy she talked to could hear, every single word she spoke got etched in his mind, as he slowly started to come out of coma, slowly started to talk again, she realized her mistake, or was it one?
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