Shattered: Rita's Story
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Last published Sun, Apr 29, 2018
"Rita?" I heard my mother yell from the front door. I ignored her, in hopes that she would just give up looking for me. She had been calling my name since she walked in the house two minutes ago. I could hear her stilettos click-clacking against the hardwood floor as she searched the house for me. "RITA!" She yelled again. As I heard her getting closer, I shrank back in the hallway closet; wishing that I could just disappear. I knew it was only a matter of seconds before she would find me. Right as that thought passed, she yanked the closet door open.
"I know your raggedy ass heard me calling you!" She yelled. "Get out the closet!" I was so terrified that I couldn't move. "I said get the fuck out the closet!" She yelled, grabbing a hold of my hair and pulling me out the closet. I began to scream as I felt strands of hair being ripped from my scalp. As horrible as this is, it's not the first time it happened. This happened almost every other night since my father left; that was almost two years ago. At only 15, there wasn't much I could do but endure it. It wasn't always like this, though. Before my mother started doing drugs, we were a happy family; that was before my father left.-
Many people couldn't fathom having to live a hell as real as this one; but for Rita, it's life. No matter how hard she tries, she can't get rid of the demons that haunt her...that is until she receives a break that she greatly needs. But all good things come to an end, right. Step into Rita's shoes and experience life with her as she tries to piece together the shattered remains of her life.
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