Inchoation
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  • Reads 62
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  • Parts 3
  • Time 17m
Ongoing, First published Apr 10, 2014
Playing on the playground. Learning how to ride a bike. Your first pet. Ahh, fond childhood memories. These are the things you look back on when you're old and ancient, and it brings a smile to your face.

But what if all these memories were suddenly taken away? However, in exchange you receive an unbelievable, close to perfect body, inside and out. New Inchoation is a process that does exactly this to the human body. But only one person has went through the process successfully and she doesn't even have a true name, well at least not anymore. She goes by Subject 419 (or S419 for short) and this is her story.

Are memories really such a small price to pay for an elite body?

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This is my first science fiction story and I'm really excited about it. This may be a little rough around the edges since this is a genre I usually don't write in. The idea for this came to me in the middle of the night and I was quick to write it down. I hope you like this story and feel it's interesting enough because I've always thought I'm not creative enough to write a science fiction story.
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