Inchoation
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Playing on the playground. Learning how to ride a bike. Your first pet. Ahh, fond childhood memories. These are the things you look back on when you're old and ancient, and it brings a smile to your face. But what if all these memories were suddenly taken away? However, in exchange you receive an unbelievable, close to perfect body, inside and out. New Inchoation is a process that does exactly this to the human body. But only one person has went through the process successfully and she doesn't even have a true name, well at least not anymore. She goes by Subject 419 (or S419 for short) and this is her story. Are memories really such a small price to pay for an elite body? ************** This is my first science fiction story and I'm really excited about it. This may be a little rough around the edges since this is a genre I usually don't write in. The idea for this came to me in the middle of the night and I was quick to write it down. I hope you like this story and feel it's interesting enough because I've always thought I'm not creative enough to write a science fiction story.
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I was never meant to leave that room. I had spent my whole life in there, imagining what it was like on the outside. I looked forward to the day when I would finally be allowed to leave. But that day was never supposed to come. Until James decided to keep his promise. He had always been there, on the other side of the glass. Waiting. The experiment wasn't over. He was still waiting for me to change. But I didn't change. Not until that night. It was dark, and there was rain. The sound of the car engine was loud, but the crash was louder. In the crash, I became something different. I changed. But not for James. This new part of me emerged for one reason; to save her. This story is a first draft and will contain typos and grammatical errors. I apologize for these in advance, and hope you can see beyond them to the story beneath. Happy reading!

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