The limit
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Last published Thu, Apr 10, 2014
(Inspired by Divergent)
In Sasha's Illinois world, instead of wondering how many days you have until death. There is a test you take that will determine it by drinking a syrup. It is supposed to put you in a trance where you stand by your lifeless self and look at the scene to see how you died. But When Sasha takes the test. She sees her and this kid she met at a hospital sitting next to each other in a deep conversation, but she doesn't see how she dies... Is this normal? What is her future self talking about?
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