Love bits (good version)

Hey so I was looking at my other accounts on wattpad and I found this book so I thought why I just redo it cuz..I mean let's face it the first one sucked
so the story starts off with a girl (that's you) and your half neko and half human
if you didn't read my friend@creepypasta_666 or something like that then she is based off grinny and her "oc" I guess I don't really know yet and you were sent off to this family cuz of slendy saying you can't have with a house filled with killers it would MURDER you childhood (get the pun...ya know since there killers...ah never mind I'm stupid)
Anyways I'm gonna put the same dialog but just Change it a little :)
The Real reason why I'm doing is because I was looking at the comments and my friend was like blah blah blah make it better basically so yea
so hope you like it and Matt this is for you :)