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That title's a mouthful. Anyway, this is deep? somewhat? I just read through all the chapters and tried to find one that doesn't scream "pretentious". Key word 'tried'. Also, 'read' is a loose term. So, grammar, spellings or anything of the sort might not be correct.
edit: it's been 2-3 years and i opened this baby up again. but like pretentious? young me, if this was pretentious then we're meant to be. and as you can see, im writing this in lowercase. that's what i call, Growth.
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