The Love Deal
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Ongoing, First published Apr 13, 2014
"So I heard you're a player, Colton. So let's play a game. Let's sweet talk. Let's play fight. Let's talk 24/7. Let's tell each other good morning and good night every day. Let's give each other cute nicknames. Let's go on dates. Let's buy each other things. Let's take walks together. Let's talk on the phone all night long. Let's hang out with each others friends. Let's hold each other and kiss and hug. And whoever falls in love first, loses. Simple, right?" I said to him.
He gave me a quizzical look at first until I explained further.
"We'll act like I asked you out and you said yes. We pretend we're dating, not like this was a plan all along." I said.
"You're on, Sabrina." Colton said, shaking my hand, sealing our deal.

Sabrina was a normal girl at school, with a burning passion for playing games and making deals. She made the ultimate deal of her time with Colton, the player of the school. They called it "The Love Deal". They pretended to date, seeing who would fall hard first.
Colton was the player of the school who agreed to "The Love Deal". He figured it'd be fun and that he couldn't fall for some girl who he'd never paid attention to. She was just some girl, ya know?

But they both fell, and fell hard, no matter what they say.
Will they stay together, or will unforeseen events tear them apart?
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