(✅) Hamara Sur ~ (Raglak)
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  • Reads 8,069
  • Votes 422
  • Parts 8
  • Time 1h 37m
Complete, First published May 17, 2018
"You didn't kill her Laksh. It was an accident. " Sujata says as she placed her hand on Laksh's shoulder. "One year, Laksh, one year, she is gone now. You need to move on." Laksh walks away from Sujata and looks out the window from their penthouse. The moon shines on him casting a silver light on his sad face. Laksh Maheshwari, the music sensation the superstar. He had everything, except her.

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"You still haven't even found that Ragini. Who knows if she even exists?" Sujata questions.

"She does." Laksh declares as he puts the wine glass on the table. "My investigators provided me with the information that Ragini is in some orphanage in Dehradun."

"Laksh you have a music contract in one week, you can't just leave for Dehradun on a ghost hunt." Sujata pleads. After her death, things changed for the worse for Laksh. He stopped going to work. He became an alcoholic. He even stopped singing which he loved the most. The only thing that he cared about was her.

"Watch me. I also need to know why Ragini never showed up to her sister's funeral." Laksh says as he walks out of the room. Tomorrow morning he will head to Dehradun to fulfill his 8th promise.


A story of two souls connected through music. Laksh a singer and an accomplished judge on the verge of destroying his own life; all because he blames himself for her death. 

Ragini a simple girl who is happy with her life. She doesn't ask for much except to live with her music. Will those two individuals come together through their love of music in Hamara Sur. Read "Hamara Sur" to find out.

This is a "Musically Yours" Raglak version
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RagSan or RagLak? SwaLak or SwaNish? 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 Ragini tried to convince Rishi "Rishi bhai, bhai please. Its not their fault...It was just an accident. They-" "They ARE to blame Ragini! Both Sanskar and Laksh did this to her. They killed her!" "Bhai it was an accident. They didn't know that she would be so worried that she would drive so rashly." "Even so Ragu, Rishi bhai is right." "Manish bhai..Mani please, not you too. Please don't say such things." "ENOUGH! Ragu, from now on you will stay away from them.Do i make myself clear?" "But Rishi Bhai-" "RAGINI, you're questioning your own brother because of them?" "Its not like that. They are my best friends, but you will always come first bhai." "Then....did i make myself clear? " "Crystal clear bhai.I'll do as you say." Ragini said as she ran to her room with tears in her eyes. 'I'm sorry i can't be with you Sanky and Laksh. I can't disobey my brothers no matter how much I want to go and console you guys right now. You guys will probably hate me for not being with you at such a time. But i can't do anything. I'm sorry...so,so sorry.' 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹