Violet Sky
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MatureComplete Mon, May 21, 20187m
The sun disappears and the world goes dark. Steven has to prepare for the worst to survive the events that may unfold.
I would like some feedback as this is my first publication. I'm thinking of writing as a serious career and need all the tips I can get early on. Tell me about misuses of words, pacing issues, lackluster design, and overall entertainment value. I would very much appreciate it, and please enjoy.
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