The Unlucky Ones
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Last published Fri, Feb 5, 2021
Tobias Eaton knows the rumors that are spread about him. He knows that they are true. Only a few others know too. When he decides to leave, he decides to open a door to a whole new life. A life that starts with a girl from Abnegation.
[IMPORTANT NOTE]
This story is going to still include a war so people do not have to ask. But, I'm going to give time a little gap before the war for some... *IMPORTANT* THINGS I'M ADDING TO MY VERSION!
{DISCLAIMER}
This story and all of its characters are owned by V. Roth and her publishing team. I am simply doing a fan fiction edition to a story I love. Please don't sue me.
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