Things You See in the River
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This is a short story about an outing gone wrong for a young girl and her friends. It involves a dead body, an investigation, an attack, and a couple coming together. This was one of the first stories I ever wrote and completed. I would appreciate any feedback that you may have. Constructive criticism is all well and good but please be tactful with it otherwise it will not be taken into account. Thank you! Much love,
~L.A. Knott
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