The Evil Within
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Last published Sun, Apr 20, 2014
Nathan Greene, a private investigator, is contacted by an anonymous source only known as "The Caller". He is told to visit an off-the-grid location in northern Maine, a place called Griffinwood Asylum. What he finds inside is beyond belief and mentally disturbing. He will discover the dark secrets concealed behind the dark walls of Griffinwood, the evil within. This is his story. Rated R for strong language, blood and gore, intense violence, usage of drugs, and cases of brutal death and frightening instances.
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