A Flamestinger's Tale: The Dragon Of Destiny (ON MASSIVE PLOT EDIT)

(On massive plot edit. None of the chapters in this book are relevant yet.)

~slow update~
Once, long ago, a small red Flamestinger dragon called Sharpwing lived in his lush forest home, Flame-scorch Island. As a little weakling, his only best friend was Phasma, a yellow Flamestinger. But when he thought life was hard at home, he realised that he had secret destiny out there in the unknown when he was carried off by two Midnight Scourge dragons! Could he survive life out there and discover the secrets that lies within?

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Cover by @AnjingBerlari A.K.A. WolframIsreading :D Thanks so much!
Ok! I have officially made a Version 2 of this story!
The first version was completely and agreeably crappy ;-;
This one is better :)
Ok so, this is my first ever original story from my own maze of imaginations in my mind(?), and I would love it if you would help me out by giving me feedback and helpful comments!
I want to publish it in real life so I need all the feedback I can get!
Thank you for understanding... and for commenting, and helping!
Thank you @aikowakoshii, @gayyhorsee, and every one of my family and friends, irl and online alike, for helping out and supporting me! :3