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Last published Tue, Apr 2, 2013
((I WILL NOT UPDATE THIS STORY EVER AGAIN! Sorry, but this was a horrible story. I'm only keeping it on here because this was the first story I ever wrote. I may hate it, but it's sentimental. I wrote this when I was 9. So, please if you do decide to read it, it will be crap.))
Atlanta was a nerd. Unatractive, Fat, Unloved. The Key word is WAS. After being rejected by her mate she leaves her pack to find a new one and start over. 3 Years later Midnight Moonlight Pack needs help with Rouges and Such. They contact Star Light Pack to help them because of their Population and Training. The only thing is, Star Light Pack is Atlanta's New Pack and Midnight Moonlight is her Old Abusive Pack. Now that old Nerdy, Unconfident, Ugly nerd's gone and replaced by a Hot, Confident and Badass Girl. Will her mate come falling to his knee's or look from the sideline's and watch his Mate with Another?
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