Critisizms and Cliches
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Last published Sat, Jun 23, 2018
When inspiration comes to Damien Hayward, the young writer is shut down by a seires of events. Not even his best peers would support. When he finds one person that could possibly help him, dramatic scenes flash before his eyes.
Join him as we venture down the mixed feelings of the 17 year old writer.
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