With Love, From Pretzel
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Last published Sun, May 27, 2018
With the pressures of coming of age, a young mare wants to live out her dream of exploring the world. The spunky unicorn runs away from home where all of her problems essentially lie; her family, her responsibilities, her marriage.. By train she ends up in the lovely town of Ellison Creek, where awaiting her there is a lovely mare almost of age and with a similar spark in her eyes.
This follows the journey of a young mare in finding herself, and whether she follows her the rules, or the whistles of the charging train.
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