Philadelphian - Part II - Broken Hearts
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Last published Thu, May 31, 2018
A fictional story of a Philadelphian 15-year old boy David Baker who has a secret second dark personality. Follow the story and watch David struggle through his high school years. Maybe you'll find this story relatable to your own feelings.
The whole story takes place in Philadelphia and even though it's based on reality, I had to bend some rules to make this story work and to be interesting. Also, I'm not even an American, so that made my writing a bit harder.
I hope you'll enjoy, don't be shy and comment about anything, I'll take some constructive criticism.
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