Coming Home

please read first book i have wrote but before i keep publishing it i want to know how i am doing so i can try again so feed back is welcomed just try not to be rude about it thanks.

Sister
Brother
Her Bestfriend
His bestfriend

Peyton has to figure out how to deal with the feelings she has or might have for Trey and along the way help her bestfriend ashley figure out her feelings for peytons brother colton and then there is the fact that Trey is Colton's Bestfriend and that they both are popular and play football and every girl wants them cause they are "bad boys" which is because of the fights they get into but more so Trey then colton and the fact that they are both players and only normally have sex with girls and then they are done.