The Breaking Point

The Breaking Point

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As Kayla looked over the edge she felt her heart pounding through her body. Until she finally fell. All her so called friends never saw it coming, because they were to busy with themselves. All the boys that saw her with a lustful eye, never thought of such. Now that Kayla is gone will they go on? This is The Breaking Point...
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