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Ongoing, First published Jun 01, 2018
السلام عليكم انا قلت حق خويتي انا أحب ولد خالي قالت عادي قوليله انك تحبينه قلت لا والله عشان انا بل مقبره قالت قولي له ابي انستا مالك بقولك موضوع قلت لا عشان اخوه الصغير او الكبير يشفونه قالت عادي انا كنت أحب ولد خالتي وطلبت الانستا مالية وأعطاني وهو خاطبها انا الحين شسوي اذا قلت حق اختي بتذبحني او اخواني بس انا ما ابي اكسر ثقت اهلي كافي انه عمتي تكره امي واخاف تشوش ابوي انه يزوجني واحد كبير شايب
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LET ME HATE YOU

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Ever wonder how your supposed best day of life will turn into a lifelong nightmare. Two people, two different worlds yet bound by the same emotion, "HATE" and "same loved ones". Marriage is intended to be an eternal bond filled with love and happiness. This was far from the truth for Asmaira and Amaan. Two broken souls entangle in the game of destiny which ended their dream of everlasting love. For one, it was a journey of regret which she has to live for the rest of her life. But why?. For other, he was forced yet he promised to seek revenge for sure., for seeking "Her" place. Who is Amaan referring to as "Her"? Who is this "loved ones" that connects both Asmara and Amaan and why do they hate each other so much without even meeting each other? "Please......." the only word that she could manage to say while trying to get out of his grip and sobbing. "Please......Let..........Me..........Go, " she stammered in between her hiccup, shaking her head with pleading eyes and folded hands. "Don't be afraid honey! I realized my mistake of not accepting you as my wife and to mark the start of our marriage how about I gift you something, " He whispered while leaning close to her ear emphasizing on the word 'gift'. Sensing her fright, he placed his hand on her waist while using the other to stroke her cheek, "how about giving you a baby tonight?". He spoke with an evil smirk. " I know it is your first time and I promise to be gentle with you, My Wife" Note: This is the first draft of the story and since then had not been edited as I'm busy writing my other stories on "Booknet." If you find typos or grammatical mistake or narration is not perfect, kindly ignore since your feedback about it would be of no use as you are reading an unedited story. I would edit it once the sequel to Kabir Hashmi is finished. And yes please be considerate when you comment. First, it's a fictional story and second, it's someone's hardwork. #5 in torment-Sept 2020 #2 in torment-23rd Sept 2020