Almost
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Last published Sat, Jun 2, 2018
*This is my first story:) Constructive critism is very much appreciated!*
"Almost" is a disgusting word. Stuck between a "what if?" and a "what now?"
A short story about a young girl named Amanda that falls in love with someone she knew she could never have. Watch her struggle to move on while the ghost of him still haunts her everywhere she looks. From the moment she first met him up until they were strangers again. A story about heartbreak and pain, relatble to many people.
Will they ever get back together? Will Amanda ever be happy again?
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