Just Need A New Perspective

Just Need A New Perspective

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MatureOngoing1h 4m

Last published Thu, Jun 21, 2018

crimescene fbi investigations teens

An unknown person starts helping the FBI with murder cases, a hacker that goes undetected and knows their way around computers. It isn't until one day that their intel woman Alexis finds a crack, a message, and a mistake flagged in a message between two high schoolers. A sister contacted another student via email and asked her to find the person who took her sister. They find where the girl lives but get a call from the intel that a missing report was just filed for the young girl they are after. They find case files hidden in a box up in her closet, her computer is encrypted but hackable. They find that the missing sister was in fact very close to the young girl so she was already on the case. One day she didn't come home from school, an investigation was opened up to find where the two went. They found that some had seen the girl about three towns over from where she lived asking about a man that lived in the area but stopped showing up at his house. The investigation begins as Selena Lunes and her best friend Jade May Lynn, are held captive with fifteen other teenage girls. All with red hair like Jade, except Selena. Cussing and gory details are enclosed within, viewer discretion is advised though it shouldn't be too bad, I am still marking it mature.

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