Beautiful morning

Beautiful morning

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It's a bright new day, birds are chirping and I'm... I'm... By the way, I would really appreciate some feedback in the comments, I want to build up a certain style of writing and would love to know what others think about it. Also, don't hesitate to point out the grammar errors (those will certainly be present as I'm not the native English speaker) or obvious plotholes. I want to grow as a writer even if I'm only an amateur one. Have fun reading my stories!
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Have you ever seen your life flash before your eyes? Seen all the good memories with you and your friends and loved ones just pass in a few split seconds before the moment comes where you know you'll die? Where you determine if it's going to be a quick or slow and painful death? Well then, same. I risk my life on a daily bases saving others, strangers, kids, families, anyone my team and I can help ranging from terrorist attacks to bombs to pretty much anything. The training that I received a few years ago allows me to do that, it allows me to be the best person that I can be, if I could go back to the day I joined the military I wouldn't change a single thing; the only thing I would've changed in my journey is to have looked after her better. To have kept her safe. But life had other plans with both of us... ***** All ideas in this book are thought of by me. Nothing has been based of another book. If something is the same as another's, it purely coincidental. *Don't copy from my book *Don't report my book because of a few violent scenes *My book is copyrighted. If I found out you copied my book, I will report you. *Remember to vote and comment

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