A Daily Dose of Criticism
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  • Parts 4
  • Time 5m
Ongoing, First published Jun 12, 2018
An amateur critic reviewing books, movies, tv shows and music.

There's two sides to every story and my goal is to tell them from a critic's stand point.
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The better plot

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I read a story and thought the plot wasn't that great. So I decided to make the changes I thought would make for better entertainment, despite having been told that I "cAn'T cRiTiCiZe OtHeR pEoPlE's WoRk If I wRiTe ToO", sweetie, once I threw away 12 chapters because the readers told me where I was heading would make for a shitty plot and I changed directions at the feedback. OR The one where Jeongyeon gets stabbed in the back but manages to get through it.