Open Your Eyes

Open Your Eyes

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Fri, Nov 6, 2020
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Paranormal
Close your eyes.....think about something happy. Maybe food? Your crush? Or money! Now, open your eyes! Seems like a easy command, right? Well, until you can't. Until someone or someTHING is preventing you from waking up or opening your eyes. Maybe it's just apart of the imagination. Or overthinking. Or maybe it's because of stress, anxiety, or depression. Well, what if it were all these things and more? While not being able to open your eyes imagine you feel yourself wake up or you know you're awake but you can't move. You see your room, you can see where your purse is on the dresser, the missing sock you've been looking for on the floor, and your bookbag on the other side of your room. You can see and think but you can't move a muscle. You're awake but how can you be awake when your eyes aren't open? It's called sleep paralysis. Many people reported experiencing sleep paralysis where they are in the REM stage asleep but they feel like they're awake but cannot move. People stay in this position for about 20 minutes or less. Sleep paralysis is scientifically defined as "A temporary inability to move or speak while falling asleep or upon waking." Many people experience this in their REM stage of sleeping. Promise, a 17 year old high school student experienced her first encounter of sleep paralysis after a unexpected death. The death traumatized Promise so much that she started to experience sleep paralysis, but this is not normal sleep paralysis. There is a Demon coming after Promise and Promise takes everything in her to stay alive. Amongst her fight, Promise discovers secrets about the death, secrets about people she thought she knew, and secrets about herself. She must find out what happened the night of the death, and finding out meant she had to stay alive.
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((Completed)) I stay on the floor. I sit staring at the bedroom door for hours, seething with anger at myself. The more I think the angrier I get. I know anger won't get me anywhere, especially here, except maybe dead. Still, I sit enraged. The whole house is silent. It's probaby the most quiet it's ever been. Normally it would soothe me, but the fact I had been sitting here almost all day now turned the quiet afternoon silence into fuel for my fire. I look over at Jade who had barely moved at all. I wish I could protect her. She came back for me even though I told her not to. There's not realy anything I can do though. Maybe I could make some kind of deal? No. That's what got us here in the first place. Then again it really can't get much worse. I have to try something or else I don't know what will happen to her. I mean she's the toughest person I know. Everyone has a breaking point and I don't want to see her get to that place. I'm already the worst friend ever, all I do is make things worse. I stare at the wall and pace the room for a few more hours. When's he getting back? I need to get out of this room and talk to him. ----- Sheri and her bestfriend, Jade, find themselves kidnapped by a sociopathic sadist named Todd during a road trip to Minnesota. To make things worse, Sheri and Jade both know no one's looking for them. They're on their own. It's a mess they can't possibly get out of, alive.

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