The Heart of a Commander
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  • Reads 14,213
  • Votes 566
  • Parts 13
  • Time 59m
Ongoing, First published Jun 15, 2018
"I will never surrender! Not to you, not to anyone! You hear me? I am Commander Heartfila, and I'll never surrender to the likes of you! Not now, not ever!"

Lucy is the daughter of the General of Magnolia, Jude Heartfila, right hand man of the king himself. Lucy's mother, Layla, was Commander of the navy force when she met and fell in love with Jude on the battle field. Together they had Lucy, however, Layla had kept a secret from Jude, one that ended her life.

Soon after Lucy turned 5, Layla passed, filled with grief, Jude retreated to his work, and left the upbringing of his only child to his servants. Lucy was trained to replace her mother, per her father's orders, and when she reached the age of 14, she was appointed official Commander of the Magnolia Sea Police, or MSP, where she hunted all Pirates that entered the harbour and territory. 

In Magnolia, the law simply states 'No magic'. All with the gift are to be 'removed'. Doesn't help that Lucy has one of the rarest and most flashy of magics.




"Too bad, I guess you're mine now, not that I mind."
Natsu Dragneel, Captain of the infamous pirate ship, Fairytail, notorious for his successful raids on island towns, villages and even cities. He has captured and removed thousands of the Sea Police's high ranking officials. And is now after the big prize, Commander Heartfila. He will stop at nothing to find and defeat the masked Commander, Who's own crew have never seen his face. He will stop at nothing to claim victory over the Commander of the seas, so he'll become king.

(Cover art is not mine, don't sue me)

(If you're noticing the missing chapters, sorry, I'm re-writing the whole thing. I found it a bit cringy and I'm doing this to all of my works at some point, thanks for your patience)
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